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Post by Smokecloud on Aug 31, 2007 15:33:54 GMT -5
Ashflower slipped away from the WaterClan camp, and made her way to The River. For the past few days, she had wanted to get away from the camp and all the cats in the clan, particularly her brother Smokecloud who infuriated her just by his presence, but she had never gotten the chance, until now.
The gray she-cat stared down into the water of the river, and watched the fish swim by. Although she should of, she didn't make any attempt to hunt the fish. Instead, with resentment, she thought of her brother, and his current rank of deputy, just one paw step from being leader. Why was Smokecloud deputy? She, Ashflower, was a better warrior wasn't she? And Smokecloud was such a submissive cat! He would never have what it takes to become a leader!
So how did he become deputy?
Hissing, Ashflower lashed her paw into the water, imagining she was striking her brother. The impact of her paw on the cool water caused the fish to scatter. The WaterClan she-cat, stared at the water, thinking back to when she was an apprentice. Her brother had become a warrior before she had, and her dislike of him formed. She didn't earn her name for some time after that. Briefly, she thought of Ottertail, he had said she wouldn't become a warrior unless her attitude improved, and she didn't. She had been so angry that the elder tom was right, and that she had been wrong.
(Sorry, I ended the post badly.)
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Post by Snowstorm on Sept 5, 2007 16:35:14 GMT -5
Greyblossom paced around nearby, clearly irritated by something. She was muttering something that sounded like," They're still treating me like an apprentice..." Seeing Ashflower nearby, the grey she-cat looked irritated that another warrior was nearby. Still, Greyblossom padded over casually and meowed cooly," Hello Ashflower...I didn't expect to see you here....Smokecloud isn't around is he?" She glanced around, as though expecting the deputy to suddenly come and scold her...
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Post by Smokecloud on Sept 6, 2007 14:51:35 GMT -5
"Hello Greyblossom," Ashflower mewed, greeting the she-cat. She could tell that she was irritated about something, and she would of asked until she asked if her brother was around, and her fur bristled. "Don't say his name! and thankfully he's not here. I think he's on patrol or something."
The tabby she-cat forced her fur to lay flat. "Sorry," she meowed. "Do you need him for something? And what's wrong? she seam angry about something."
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Post by Snowstorm on Sept 7, 2007 16:09:09 GMT -5
"I don't need Smokecloud for anything..." growled Greyblossom." I just don't want to see the deputy so soon after my latest punishment..." She stared at her paws, let out a hiss. Today's punishment for rebelling(as usual) was caring for the elders. "An apprentice's task!" the grey she-cat muttered, too quietly for Ashflower to hear.
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